2018.11.16 Homework

2018-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

Did you enjoy the weekend? What a great rest! I would liked to listen to fortune-telling when I was young because I didn't know that it also includes bad fortunes, I just knew there are only good things and I could prepare the future if I hear that. But when I met a bad fortune at a first time, I thought that could be a barrier of my challenges and life because when I started to make something great, I could be afraid because of nagative thoughts and worries. Now I know that the most of bad fortunes are not for real and it just make us be worried and passive. So I try to don't believe it because I think if I believe it, it can comes true. This is scientific world and we can make our life ourselves.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su [이름]!

Yes! I enjoyed my weekend. I was able to rest and it was really great! ^^ I\'m glad that you also had a great one!

See you later!

~Teacher Gina

I would liked to listen to fortune-telling when I was young because I didn\'t know that it also includes bad fortunes, I just knew there are only good things and I could prepare the future if I hear that. But when I met a bad fortune at a first time, I thought that could be a barrier of my challenges and life because when I started to make something great, I could be afraid because of nagative thoughts and worries. Now I know that the most of bad fortunes are not for real and it just make us be worried and passive. So I try to don\'t believe it because I think if I believe it, it can comes true. This is scientific world and we can make our life ourselves.

>> I liked listening to fortune telling when I was young because I didn\'t know that it also includes bad fortunes. I just knew that there were only good things and I could prepare for the future if I hear that. But when I met a bad fortune for the first time, I thought that could be a barrier in my challenges and life. Whenever I started to make something great, I would be afraid because of negative thoughts and worries. Now I know that most of the bad fortunes are not real and it only makes us worried and passive. So I try not to believe it because I think if I do, it can come true. This is a scientific world and we can make our life ourselves.

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