2018. 11. 16 The place I can never forget

2018-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

You always make me to be brave and that is why I like and believe you. Thank you so much. To be honestly, I usually can understand your words about 60% and guess the rests. Reading your feedback, I realized that there are some misunderstandings when I pronounce some words. I will study for listening English and make my diction exactly for the conversations with you. :) Anyway, the place I can never forget is Songjeong, Busan. This is beach where can surf. I visited to there for surfing in my summer holidays and I can't forget the waves, sunlight, atmosphere and surfing teachers who was very firendly, even the dog at the surfing shop. The morning after stayed at there was magnificent and I enjoyed the sunlight at the guest house of surfing shop in the morning. Even I liked the surfing teacher for a short time! I became to have a dream to live in Busan because of the great memories about sea. I hope you could experience that too, if you want!

강사 첨삭

Hi Su [이름]!

Thank you so much for appreciating. I\'m glad that I\'m able to influence you in a good way. :)
I really admire you for wanting to improve and really learn. Keep it going. I know that you will succeed. And don\'t be shy or afraid to ask me questions or to let me repeat what I was saying... it\'s fine. :) Remember, we\'re partners here, right? ^^
I also want to experience surfing because it really looks cool. The problem is, I actually don\'t know how to swim. (LOL) I guess, I need to learn swimming first.

~Teacher Gina

You always make me to be brave and that is why I like and believe you. Thank you so much. To be honestly, I usually can understand your words about 60% and guess the rests. Reading your feedback, I realized that there are some misunderstandings when I pronounce some words. I will study for listening English and make my diction exactly for the conversations with you. :)
Anyway, the place I can never forget is Songjeong, Busan. This is beach where can surf. I visited to there for surfing in my summer holidays and I can\'t forget the waves, sunlight, atmosphere and surfing teachers who was very firendly, even the dog at the surfing shop. The morning after stayed at there was magnificent and I enjoyed the sunlight at the guest house of surfing shop in the morning. Even I liked the surfing teacher for a short time! I became to have a dream to live in Busan because of the great memories about sea. I hope you could experience that too, if you want!

>> You always make me brave and that\'s why I like and believe you. Thank you so much. To be honest, I can usually understand 60% of the words you say and guess the rest. Reading your feedback, I realized that there are words that were mispronounced. I will study to improve my listening and make my diction to be exact in having conversations with you.
Anyway, the place which I can never forget would be Songjeong in Busan. This is a beach where I can surf. I visited there for surfing in my summer holidays and I can\'t forget the waves, sunlight, atmosphere and the surfing teachers who were very friendly. I also remember the dog at the surfing shop. The morning there was magnificent and I enjoyed the sunlight at the guesthouse of the surfing shop. I hope you could experience it too, if you want!

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