2018. 11. 19

2018-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

I know that sometimes they can't avoid that decision. In my case, I have worked at a convenience store during my entire high school life and I'm still working at another work place because I have a lot of dreams but I couldn't expect on my family to support me. Honestly, sometimes I feel regret about my scores and angry at these situations even if I got my dream major, Nursing and my score's not too bad although I managed all of these, studying, working and enjoying my hobbies well. I mean, having a job during the school days can help them to manage their life and dream but they must certainly feel upset somedays. So I think that's not a problem but the best one is not concentrate on working too much.

강사 첨삭

Good Evening, Su [이름]!


Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the homework I gave yesterday. I totally agree that working while studying will definitely help us reach our goals and dreams in life. It is good for us to have that experience but as you said, there are times when it\'s just really hard that we feel upset. But I guess, that is also a part of our learning in life, right? I also agree that we should not concentrate on working too much especially of we are studying. We should learn to balance everything to succeed. ^^


~Teacher Gina


I know that sometimes they can\'t avoid that decision. In my case, I have worked at a convenience store during my entire high school life and I\'m still working at another work place because I have a lot of dreams but I couldn\'t expect on my family to support me. Honestly, sometimes I feel regret about my scores and angry at these situations even if I got my dream major, Nursing and my score\'s not too bad although I managed all of these, studying, working and enjoying my hobbies well. I mean, having a job during the school days can help them to manage their life and dream but they must certainly feel upset somedays. So I think that\'s not a problem but the best one is not concentrate on working too much.


>> I know that sometimes they can\'t avoid that decision. In my case, I have worked at a convenience store during my entire high school life and I\'m still working at another work place because I have a lot of dreams but I couldn\'t expect my family to support me. Honestly, I sometimes feel regretful about my scores and getting angry with these situations, even if I got my dream major which is Nursing and my scores are not too bad. I was able to manage studying, working and enjoying my hobbies as well. I mean, having a job during the school days can help them to manage their life and dream but they must certainly feel upset sometimes. So I think that it\'s not a problem but the best thing to do is to not concentrate on working too much.

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