2018.11.20

2018-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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Well, I don't argee about it entirely. Definitly some hard times can be such a nutrient in my life but I could get hurts as experience what I don't need to experience. Sometimes it causes a Post Traumatic Stress Disorder and make me to be tired. For instance, a person who have through the very hard times can be nagative and not out going than the person who always have took happy times. Of course it's not absolute and it can be difference by their personalities, thoughts and behaviors. And it's not good to be caught with it for a long time so we should get out of it if we experienced bad things. If we through out of it well, we can also grow up well.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su [이름]!


I agree with what you said. Not all experiences can actually make us better. But it is dependent on how people perceive it actually. I hope that no matter how hard challenges will be upon us, we can go through it well and I hope that it will help us become a better person. ^^


~Teacher Gina


Well, I don\'t argee about it entirely. Definitly some hard times can be such a nutrient in my life but I could get hurts as experience what I don\'t need to experience. Sometimes it causes a Post Traumatic Stress Disorder and make me to be tired. For instance, a person who have through the very hard times can be nagative and not out going than the person who always have took happy times. Of course it\'s not absolute and it can be difference by their personalities, thoughts and behaviors. And it\'s not good to be caught with it for a long time so we should get out of it if we experienced bad things. If we through out of it well, we can also grow up well.


>> Well, I don\'t agree on it entirely. Definitely, having some hard times can benefit my life but there are also some experiences which I can get hurt, and some that I don\'t need. Sometimes it causes Post Traumatic Stress Disorder and it makes me tired. For instance, a person who went through very hard times can be negative and not outgoing compared to a person who always had happy times. Of course it\'s not absolute and can be different based on their personalities, thoughts and behaviors. And it\'s not good to be caught with it for a long time so we should get out of it if we experienced bad things. If we go through it well, we can also grow up as a person.

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