2018.11.21
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Su [이름]!
Thank you for sharing this very good example. I really appreciate it. I really hope that adults will be more responsible to filter the things children watch nowadays to make sure that they will not be influenced in a negative way.
~Teacher Gina
The media influence public people unknownly by direct or indirect way. I know a study, The Emulating Model, they show children of two groups two diffenence videos. The first video was a man hitting a mannequin and the group who watched it hit a manequin when they met it. And the second group watched another video that a man cherish a mannequin, and they petted and hugged the mannequin when they met it. This is just one of the many examples. We are used to the masseges from media, and when we meet the similar situation, we do or think something like that. And that\'s why we have to select good things and show it to children.
>> The media influence the public unknowingly in a direct or indirect way. I know a study, The Emulating Model, that showed different videos to two groups of children. The first video was a man hitting mannequin and the group who watched it, also hit a mannequin when they saw one. And the second group watched another video which a man cherishes a mannequin and so the children petted and hugged the mannequin when they saw it. This is just one of the many examples. We are used to the messages from the media and when we meet the similar situation, we do or think something like that. That\'s why we have to select good things and show it to children.
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