2018.11.22

2018-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

I think the first of that is not making troubles. That's the most important thing. My neighbors are young couples and they always speak loud as I can hear that. The girl is everyday, always whining and speaks like child's coquetry and I feel like my ears are bleeding. Moreover, the guy grills pork everyday maybe without opening windows so my room is fulled with the smell and that causes vomiting. I have hit the wall and imitated the girl loudly to stop the whining sound but they are SUPER STRONG and they are not a kind of people who influenced by others and I'm sure that I will going to be crazy when I get out of this house. I even don't expect to meet the neighborhood who is friendly and sometimes giving a present to me. The best is clam and commonsensical.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Su [이름]!


I hope that your neighbors would become considerate of the other people  around them. I also hope that you\'ll get to find a neighbor who\'s really good and won\'t cause any troubles. ^^


~Teacher Gina


I think the first of that is not making troubles. That\'s the most important thing. My neighbors are young couples and they always speak loud as I can hear that. The girl is everyday, always whining and speaks like child\'s coquetry and I feel like my ears are bleeding. Moreover, the guy grills pork everyday maybe without opening windows so my room is fulled with the smell and that causes vomiting. I have hit the wall and imitated the girl loudly to stop the whining sound but they are SUPER STRONG and they are not a kind of people who influenced by others and I\'m sure that I will going to be crazy when I get out of this house. I even don\'t expect to meet the neighborhood who is friendly and sometimes giving a present to me. The best is clam and commonsensical.


>> I think the most important thing is that they don\'t make any troubles. My neighbors are young couples and they always speak loudly since I can hear it. The girl is whining and speaks coquetry like a child everyday that I feel like my ears are bleeding. Moreover, the guy grills pork everyday maybe without opening the windows that\'s why my room is filled with the smell which causes vomiting. I hit the wall and imitated the girl loudly to stop her whining sound but they are super strong and they are not the kind of people who is influenced by others. I\'m sure that I\'ll get crazy when I get out of this house. I don\'t even expect to meet a neighbor who is friendly and sometimes gives presents to me. The best kind of neighbor is calm and commonsensical. 

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