2018.11.26

2018-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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Good evening, Gina! I'm always looking forward to your homework topic because it's always interesting to think. I was sure the technology made the world developed and easy to live. But after thinking, I recalled some problems caused by technology such as environmental pollution, maximization of capitalism and ethical issues in robot and clone industry. I can't find it totally has only good outputs. But it's also the true that the technology makes the world easily and colorfully and we can't live without any technologies now. So I totally agree with that it have made the world better to live but there are still some problems so the goverment and scientists should control it.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su [이름]!


Good evening! Thank you for appreciating the homework that I\'m giving you. I also want to let you know that I also appreciate your answers and opinions on each topic. ^^


~Teacher Gina



I was sure the technology made the world developed and easy to live. But after thinking, I recalled some problems caused by technology such as environmental pollution, maximization of capitalism and ethical issues in robot and clone industry. I can\'t find it totally has only good outputs. But it\'s also the true that the technology makes the world easily and colorfully and we can\'t live without any technologies now. So I totally agree with that it have made the world better to live but there are still some problems so the goverment and scientists should control it.


>> I was sure the technology made the world developed and easy to live in. But after thinking, But after thinking, I recalled some problems caused by technology such as environmental pollution, maximization of capitalism and ethical issues in robot and clone industry. It can\'t find it to only have good outputs. But it\'s also true that the technology makes it easy and colorful for the world and we cannot live without it now. So I totally agree that it made the world better but there are still some problems so the government and scientists should control it.

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