2018.11.27

2018-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

That's not true. Once I heard that sentence, "I can't buy the happines with money but I can be happy with a lot of money.", I think it's not wrong in the world which I live in. But I also can't say it's totally true because there are a lot of qualifications to judge one's success and it's different to each others. Someone such as businessman tell us the most rich person is successful but the other one such as a teacher or a nurse says helping a lot of people and feeling worth is success. And maybe another one could talks to the fame is the best qualification of success. So we all can be successful in our own standards.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Su [이름]!


I like your answer. You\'re right we all have our own set of standards of what is successful or not. And we, ourselves, can only tell if we are already successful or not based on the standard that we set.


See you later! ^^


~Teacher Gina


That\'s not true. Once I heard that sentence, \"I can\'t buy the happines with money but I can be happy with a lot of money.\", I think it\'s not wrong in the world which I live in. But I also can\'t say it\'s totally true because there are a lot of qualifications to judge one\'s success and it\'s different to each others. Someone such as businessman tell us the most rich person is successful but the other one such as a teacher or a nurse says helping a lot of people and feeling worth is success. And maybe another one could talks to the fame is the best qualification of success. So we all can be successful in our own standards.


>> That\'s not true. I heard a sentence once before and it says, \"I can\'t buy the happiness with money but I can be happy with a lot of money.\"  I think it\'s not wrong in the world which I live in. But I also can\'t say it\'s totally true because there are a lot of qualifications to judge one\'s success and it\'s different to each other. Sometimes a businessman tells is that the richest person is successful but others like a teacher or a nurse says that helping a lot of people is worth it and it is a success. And maybe someone can say that fame is the best qualification of success. So we all can be successful in our own standards.


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