2018.11.28

2018-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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I also wanted to study at abroad or outside of my city because I studied and lived in only my hometown so I thought if I enter the university where is far from my home, I could independent and there's going to be something new with me. I think also many other students are same with me. I suppose that they want to make their own life, maybe also think they're already adult, and want to widen their mental vision or they should go to another city or country unavoidably for their dream, language and job. Desire to broad is good for our life.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su [이름]!


Thank you for submitting your answer to the homework I gave. Indeed, many people wants to go and study abroad or even to far away place from their hometown because they want to be independent and they want to explore more while catching their dreams.


~Teacher Gina


I also wanted to study at abroad or outside of my city because I studied and lived in only my hometown so I thought if I enter the university where is far from my home, I could independent and there\'s going to be something new with me. I think also many other students are same with me. I suppose that they want to make their own life, maybe also think they\'re already adult, and want to widen their mental vision or they should go to another city or country unavoidably for their dream, language and job. Desire to broad is good for our life.


>> I also wanted to study abroad or outside my city because I only lived and studied in my hometown. So I thought that if I enter a university that is far from home, I could be independent and there\'s going to be something new with me. I also think that other students think the same way. I suppose that they want to make their own life. Maybe, they also think that they\'re already adults and want to widen their mental vision or they should go to another city or country for their dreams, language learning and job. The desire to go abroad is good for our life.

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