2018.12.06
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Su [이름]!
I agree, it\'s really hard to choose between the options given. But I guess, what you said is a wise choice. It would be great to earn a lot and afterwards, when we were able to save enough, we can stop ad take a rest and spend time with our family and friends.
~Teacher Gina
I think it\'s a difficult question to choice. However I will rather pick a high salary job with few rest time. Because I have earned lots of money with two jobs until some months ago and I stopped it now because I thought I need some rest. I got lots of time to rest and it\'s very nice but I\'m little bit hard to enjoy my hobbies and travel. There are so many things in my to-do list and I need expenses to achieve them. So I will choice a higher salary job and if I be exhausted, I will change a job and get some rest.
>> It think it\'s difficult to choose for this question. However, I will rather pick a high salary job with a few time to rest. I have earned a lot of money with two jobs until some months ago and I stopped it now because I thought I need some rest. I got a lot of time to rest and it\'s very nice but it\'s a little bit hard for me to enjoy my hobbies and travel. There are so many things in my to-do list and I need money to spend to achieve them. So I will choose a higher salary job and If I will be exhausted, I will change it and get some rest.
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