2018.12.07

2018-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

I'm sorry about late. It was been a long time. I also have did it. In my case, I usually buy something unnecessarily when I feel something's empty in my mind. Some people feel that it will be better if they buy or eat something when they feel alone, feel there is a kind of lack and are just boring. It will be a little happiness in their days and it's okay to give theirselves presants. But We all know it's not real solutions and it even can makes the situation worse if it's excessive.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su [이름]!


Thank you for sharing your opinion about the homework I gave last time. It\'s fine if you submitted it late, don\'t worry. ^^


~Teacher Gina


I\'m sorry about late. It was been a long time.
I also have did it. In my case, I usually buy something unnecessarily when I feel something\'s empty in my mind. Some people feel that it will be better if they buy or eat something when they feel alone, feel there is a kind of lack and are just boring. It will be a little happiness in their days and it\'s okay to give theirselves presants. But We all know it\'s not real solutions and it even can makes the situation worse if it\'s excessive.


>> I\'m sorry about being late. It has been a long time.

I also did it. In my case, I usually buy something unnecessarily when I feel something\'s empty in my mind. Some people feel that it will be better if they buy or eat something when they feel alone, when they feel that something\'s lacking and when they are bored. It will bring them little happiness in their days and it\'s okay for them to give themselves presents. But we all know that it\'s not the real solutions and it even can makes the situation worse if it\'s excessive.

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