2018.12.11

2018-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

I think they should better to go to Jeonju. There are so many houses built by Korean traditional architecture, called Hanock. They can enjoy Hanock village, Korean street food and even can stay over at the house. And they will also get the opportunity to wear Hanbok, Korean traditional clothes because there are many Hanbok shops where can borrow beautiful, various Hanbok. Jeonju is in Jeolla-do and Jeolla-do is most famous for nice food in Korea.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Su [이름]!


Thanks for sharing this idea. I think it will really suit the taste of foreigners and other visitors since you can experience and learn about Korea more in that place.


~Teacher Gina


I think they should better to go to Jeonju. There are so many houses built by Korean traditional architecture, called Hanock. They can enjoy Hanock village, Korean street food and even can stay over at the house. And they will also get the opportunity to wear Hanbok, Korean traditional clothes because there are many Hanbok shops where can borrow beautiful, various Hanbok. Jeonju is in Jeolla-do and Jeolla-do is most famous for nice food in Korea.


>> I think they should better to go to Jeonju. There are so many houses built by Korean traditional architecture, called Hanock. They can enjoy roaming around the Hanock village, eat Korean street foods and even can stay over at the house. And they will also get the opportunity to wear Hanbok, Korean traditional clothes because there are many Hanbok shops where you can borrow beautiful and various Hanboks. Jeonju is in Jeolla-do and Jeolla-do which are famous for their nice food in Korea.

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