2018.12.17

2019-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

I also like fast and instant things. Time can be subtituted with money in nowadays and people expect more as the world become fast. For an example, we sent letters to give someone our heart and we even enjoyed it but we can send it immedietly now and became can't wait. We are angry easily even if the internet is slow. There are people who still like slow but most of us tend to think the slow is and old one and not appropriate for this world.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Su [이름]!

How are you? Anyway, thank you for sharing your opinion. ^^

~Teacher Gina

I also like fast and instant things. Time can be subtituted with money in nowadays and people expect more as the world become fast. For an example, we sent letters to give someone our heart and we even enjoyed it but we can send it immedietly now and became can\'t wait. We are angry easily even if the internet is slow. There are people who still like slow but most of us tend to think the slow is and old one and not appropriate for this world.

>> I also like fast and instant things. Time can be substituted with money nowadays and people expect more as the world moves fast. For an example, we sent letters to give someone our hearts and we even enjoyed it. But now, we can send it immediately and become impatient. We get angry easily when the internet is slow. There are people who still like it slow but most of us tend to think that it is already an old way and it\'s not something to be appreciated in this world.

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