2018.12.18

2019-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

There are too many copies even habits and tastes. I don't like to follow fashions but I'm influented by fashions and trends while I don't know. People stain to follow the trends and I think it's because they don't want to be excluded from the public. They don't want to be a minority but also want to be uniqe so they follow the person who seems to be hip and cool by themselves. Sometimes it inspires us and gives us easy choices but it kills our own personalities, colors and tastes as a result.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Su [이름]!


Thank you for this. I agree that we tend to follow the trend even if we\'re not aware about it since we don\'t want to miss out. You\'re also right when you said that it\'s fine since we get our inspirations but we should also remember that we have our own personality, color and taste, and we should not lose them. ^^


~Teacher Gina



There are too many copies even habits and tastes. I don\'t like to follow fashions but I\'m influented by fashions and trends while I don\'t know. People stain to follow the trends and I think it\'s because they don\'t want to be excluded from the public. They don\'t want to be a minority but also want to be uniqe so they follow the person who seems to be hip and cool by themselves. Sometimes it inspires us and gives us easy choices but it kills our own personalities, colors and tastes as a result.


>> There are too many things that we copy, even habits and tastes. I don\'t like to follow fashion but I\'m influenced by it and the trends unaware. People tend to follow the trends and I think it\'s because they don\'t want to be excluded from the public. They don\'t want to be a minority but also want to be unique to they follow persons who seem to be hip and cool by themselves. Sometimes it inspires us and gives us easy choices but it kills our own personalities, colors and tastes as a result.

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