2018.12.21

2018-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

Of course I can understand them. I also have considered the price for the most important thing when I don't have enough money or when I buy not important products. Because I don't have many options for the first case and in the second case, I think it's kind of a waste of money to buy something what doesn't matter with the quality. But I don't agree about it is the best qualification of buying product or service. Most of too cheap things are not good enough and there are many times when we have to choice things that has great quality. For instance, I will be so sad if somebody choice the cheap medicine without doctor or simple treatment because of money. It improve the quality of life to spend enough money sometimes.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Su [이름]!


Thank you for sharing your thought about the homework I sent last time. I also understand people who always consider the price of a product or service before purchasing them since I\'m also one of them. And your right on the last part, there are still things and services where we should still consider the quality since it helps improve the quality of our life. ^^


Merry Christmas, Su [이름]!!! See you later! ^^


~Teacher Gina



Of course I can understand them. I also have considered the price for the most important thing when I don\'t have enough money or when I buy not important products. Because I don\'t have many options for the first case and in the second case, I think it\'s kind of a waste of money to buy something what doesn\'t matter with the quality. But I don\'t agree about it is the best qualification of buying product or service. Most of too cheap things are not good enough and there are many times when we have to choice things that has great quality. For instance, I will be so sad if somebody choice the cheap medicine without doctor or simple treatment because of money. It improve the quality of life to spend enough money sometimes.


>> Of course I can understand them. I have also considered the price in buying the most important things when I don\'t have enough money or when I buy unimportant products. Since I don\'t have any options for both cases, I think it\'s a kind of waste of money to buy something wherein the quality doesn\'t matter. But I don\'t agree about it as the best qualification in buying a product or service. Most of the things that are too cheap are not good enough and there are many times when we have to choose things that have great qualities. For instance, I will be so sad if somebody chooses to buy a cheap medicine without a doctor\'s prescription or a simple treatment because of money. It improves the quality of life to spend enough money sometimes.

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