2018.12.24

2019-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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I have agreed with it but not now. Because Christmas was big event when I was young. Everyone is look excited and all the streets are colorful and filled with Christmas songs and also I could get presents. But now I bacame an adult and I feel other people are not look much excited. I have to work so I couldn\'t enjoy the holiday and there are no happy Christmas atmosphere than several years ago. But if I go out to abroad such as U.S or Australia, maybe I can see the colorful and joyful street. I except to see it.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Su [이름]!


I hope that you\'ll be able to experience a wonderful Christmas again, especially this year. ^^


~Teacher Gina



I have agreed with it but not now. Because Christmas was big event when I was young. Everyone is look excited and all the streets are colorful and filled with Christmas songs and also I could get presents. But now I bacame an adult and I feel other people are not look much excited. I have to work so I couldn\'t enjoy the holiday and there are no happy Christmas atmosphere than several years ago. But if I go out to abroad such as U.S or Australia, maybe I can see the colorful and joyful street. I except to see it.


>> I agreed with it before but not these days because Christmas was a big event when I was young. Everyone looks excited and all the streets are colorful, filled with Christmas songs and I could also get presents. But now that I became an adult, I feel that other people don\'t look much excited. I have to work so I couldn\'t enjoy the holiday and the atmosphere of Christmas is way different that several years ago. But if I go abroad such as in the U.S or Australia, maybe I will be able to see the colorful and joyful streets. I expect to see them.

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