2018 for me
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Jay!(\",)
Let\'s thank God for all his blessings to us in 2018. Let\'s look forward to a more wonderful 2019. Cheers!(\",)
~Lynn
I finished a military obligation on begining of the year and returned to school.
>> I finished my military obligation at the beginning of the year and returned to school.
My heart was fluttering for restarting my major and meeting my friends I have not met for a while.
>> My heart was fluttering as I restart my major and meet my friends whom I have not met for a while.
Since the semester started, I had to study hard because I had not studied for 2 years and it was difficult to understand and follow the curriculum.
>> correct!
In addition, there were so many peers that start to prepare resume and apply to many companies.
>> In addition, there were so many peers that started to prepare their resumes and apply to many companies.
Even though I have a plan to go to Australia, I was afraid of difference between them and me.
>> Even though I have a plan to go to Australia, I was afraid of the difference between them and me.
Anyway, now is the end of the year and I think I did well this year.
>> correct!
The 2018 has various meaning like fear, thrill, and so on to me.
>> In 2018, I felt different feelings like fear, thrill and so on.
I hope I can do everything well next year and there are no big inccidents around me and all people.
>> I hope to do well next year and I hope there will be no big accidents to me and to the people around me.
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