2018 for me

2018-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

I finished a military obligation on begining of the year and returned to school. My heart was fluttering for restarting my major and meeting my friends I have not met for a while. Since the semester started, I had to study hard because I had not studied for 2 years and it was difficult to understand and follow the curriculum. In addition, there were so many peers that start to prepare resume and apply to many companies. Even though I have a plan to go to Australia, I was afraid of difference between them and me. Anyway, now is the end of the year and I think I did well this year. The 2018 has various meaning like fear, thrill, and so on to me. I hope I can do everything well next year and there are no big inccidents around me and all people.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Jay!(\",)

Let\'s thank God for all his blessings to us in 2018. Let\'s look forward to a more wonderful 2019. Cheers!(\",)

~Lynn

I finished a military obligation on begining of the year and returned to school.

>> I finished my military obligation at the beginning of the year and returned to school.

 My heart was fluttering for restarting my major and meeting my friends I have not met for a while.

>>  My heart was fluttering as I restart my major and meet my friends whom I have not met for a while.

Since the semester started, I had to study hard because I had not studied for 2 years and it was difficult to understand and follow the curriculum.

>> correct!

In addition, there were so many peers that start to prepare resume and apply to many companies.

>> In addition, there were so many peers that started to prepare their resumes and apply to many companies.

Even though I have a plan to go to Australia, I was afraid of difference between them and me.

>> Even though I have a plan to go to Australia, I was afraid of the difference between them and me.

Anyway, now is the end of the year and I think I did well this year.

>> correct!

 The 2018 has various meaning like fear, thrill, and so on to me.

>> In 2018, I felt different feelings like fear, thrill and so on.

 I hope I can do everything well next year and there are no big inccidents around me and all people.

>> I hope to do well next year and I hope there will be no big accidents to me and to the people around me.

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