20180710 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi David! Thanks for the effort in doing this homework. You got a nice story today.
Consider that as a good conversation topic because you talked about interests.
I will talk to you again tomorrow. ^^
~~Teacher May~~
I don\'t have many chances to think about this...
>> I couldn\'t think much about this.
I like every subjects.. But nowadays I like to talk about work out.
>> I like all subjects but nowadays, I like talking about working out.
On sunday I went to my firends wedding and there was a man who like to work out.
>> On Sunday, I attended my friend\'s wedding and there was a man who like to work out.
He have a muscular body.
>> He has a good body figure especially the muscles.
I heard that he started to exercise before a year ago.
>> I heard that he started to do exercise a year ago.
So we talked a lot thing that related to our body and exercise.
>> So, we talked about a lot of things that are related to physical fitness.
From diet which food he usually eat to how he work out.
>> We also talked about the foods that he usually eats while trying to work out.
we talked about a lot of things. such as he is good at bench press, I\'m good at squat.
>> We also talked about a lot things like our interests - bench press and squat.
hmm. also I\'m senior next semester in september,
>> Also, I told him that I\'ll be a senior university student in September.
I\'m interested in social issues or problem. Because think and talk about that can be helpful to me. So that can be our conversation\'s topic we can talk together.
>> I\'m interested in social issues or problems because it\'s helpful for me to think logically. It\'s also helpful for me to start a conversation.
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