20180928homework2
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Logan! Thank you for your effort. I appreciate your thoughts on this one! Definitely! We should be cautious with our actions especially with strangers, like what you have said, your actions maybe okay with people who are close to you but may not be with strangers. In other words, we have to put boundaries when it comes to strangers. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I think people must behave differently with frends than with family.
>>I think people must behave differently with friends than with family. (careful with your spelling; friends ^ ^)
If I treat to stranger like my friends, I\'ll lose my credit.
>>If I treat strangers like they are my friends, I\'ll lose my stand. (credit is also a good word, but stand is more appropriate because you are trying to emphasize a point.)
I speak bad word to my friends for a joke.
>>I speak bad words to my friends as a joke.
But It might be rude for others.
>>Correct (\"it\" not \"It\" ^ ^)
I think we have a lot of characters to each person.
>>I think we express ourselves differently to different people.
I treat people who are close to me better than stranger.
>>I treat people who are close to me better than strangers. (..a stranger)
Because I don\'t know they will be close to me.
>>Because I don\'t know whether they will be close to me or not.
So I just act politely.
>>Correct OR
>>So I just act appropriately.
I guess I\'m a little pessimistic about relationship.
>>I guess I\'m a little pessimistic about relationships. (..a relationship)
In other words, I\'m causious about relationship.
>>In other words, I\'m cautious about relationships. (careful with your spelling; cautious ^ ^)
I think the most important thing in relationship is that take care of a close person.
>>I think the most important thing in a relationship is knowing how to take care of that person close to you.
It is hard to take care of every person to me.
>>It is hard for me to take care of everyone. OR
>>I find it hard for me to take care of everyone.
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