20181001 homework

Hi Logan! Thank you on your thoughts on this one. I agree with your opinion; where\'s the enjoyment in seeing magnificent creatures behind bars? For people who care about animals and want to support rescue efforts, sanctuaries can be an appealing and compassionate alternative to zoos. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah 

I think zoos must be gone.

>>I think zoos must be banned or closed.

I watched a news about zoos.

>>Correct

Many animals suffered from zoo\'s environment.

>>Many animals suffered from the zoo\'s environment. (don\'t forget your article \"the\")

Some tigers are so thin and most of polar bears suffered from inappropriate temperature.

>>Some tigers are so thin and most of the polar bears suffered from inappropriate temperature. (don\'t forget your article \"the\")

Someone says it\'s good for children.

>>Correct

Unless childeren look at unhealthy animals, it will be much good for childeren.

>>Unless, children look at healthy animals, it wouldn\'t do  much good to them.

So the best way I think is animal shelters.

>>So the best way I think is an animal shelter. OR

>>So the best way I think are animal shelters.  

we can build some animal shelters and open to public.

>>We can build an animal sanctuary and open it to the public.

The point is no stress for animals.

>>Correct

Only in controlled area, we can watch animals that are taken care by shelter\'s clerk.

>>Only in a controlled area, we can watch animals that are taken cared of by the shelters\' clerks. 

I think it\'s hard in Korea.

>>Correct

Animal\'s right is law in Korea.

>>Animal rights is a strict law in Korea. 

I think it\'s our important project.

>>Correct

A conclusion is zoos are human\'s selfishness.

>>Correct 

We have to find alternatives.

>>Correct

PS. Thanks for your feedback^^ Can I ask you something? As I said to you, I\'m thinking about studying abroad. I searched and Philippines is well known for English studying. I\'m considering a lot. What do you think about studying abroad for English? Is it necessary? I hope this question isn\'t rude

>>Definitely this question is not rude. I appreciate that you would like to know my opinion about it. A lot of Koreans come to the Philippines to learn English. I had a first hand experience on this one because I have also been a teacher to Koreans in a classroom setting, we call it a \"man to man\" or \"one on one\" class. I have witnessed great improvements among my students and my co teachers\' students too.  Some benefits also are; you would have the constant attention of the teacher so they can listen to and speak more English; and your strengths and weaknesses are addressed more consistently and fully. I suggest you try! But of course, you can always have your online class with us.^ ^