20181121
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Min,
Now you know how hard it is to make kimchi so you should help your mom every year. Or, you could just buy, that\'s the easiest!(\",)
~Lynn
I skipped the classes 2 days in a row because I was not in a good condition, last couple of days.
>> I skipped my classes 2 days in a row because I was not in a good condition for the last couple of days.
I helped my parents make kimchi, we call it [kimjang] in Korean, meaning making kimchi for a whole next year for families and relatives.
>> I helped my parents make kimchi, we call it [kimjang] in Korean, meaning making kimchi for the whole year for families and relatives.
Of course we just made it only for 3 persons for our family. hehe.
>> Of course we just made it for 3 people - for our family.
It was my first time experience I\'ve ever cooked kimchi.
>> It was my first time to experience making kimchi.
It was really hard job to make kimchi of even just 30 heads of cabbage.
>> correct!
Until last year, my mom and her sisters have gathered together in the eldest aunt\'s home for Kimjang.
>> correct!
They normally made more than two hundred heads of cabbages for all of their siblings\' families.
>> correct!
I cannot understand how they have made it that much so far.
>> correct!
I felt so sorry that I have never helped them.
>> correct!
The next morning, I couldn\'t wake up with all the pain in my muscles and got a cold as worse.
>> The next morning, I couldn\'t wake up due to muscle pain and worse, I got a cold.
My mom said she doesn\'t have to worry about kimchi for next year and she\'s feeling so rich now. haha.
>> correct!
I feel the same.
>> correct!
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