2019.11.05
학생이 쓴 원문
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Do you consider artificial beauty (cosmetic surgery) to still be beauty? Why/why not
No, i don\'t think so. I think the beauty is different from just words saying to be pretty. Beauty word is pretty more gentle and noble. Artificial beauty can make person be more pretty and handsome in look but it can\'t make ourself like inner look be beautiful. I think that beautiful person has beautiful mind besides beautiful look.
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In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Do you consider artificial beauty (cosmetic surgery) to still be beauty? Why/why not
No, I don\'t think so.
>> correct
I think the beauty is different from just words saying to be pretty. Beauty word is pretty more gentle and noble.
>> I think that the word beauty is different from just pretty.
Beauty word is pretty more gentle and noble.
>> The word beauty is more gentle and noble.
Artificial beauty can make person be more pretty and handsome in look but it can\'t make ourself like inner look be beautiful.
>> Artificial beauty can make a person look prettier and more handsome, but it can\'t make his/her inner self more beautiful.
I think that beautiful person has beautiful mind besides beautiful look.
>> I think that a beautiful person not only has a beautiful mind but also a beautiful look.
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