2019.11.07
학생이 쓴 원문
1.Every year during this season, we got to see the blossoms. Cherry blossom viewing is very popular in korea as well.
2.Steady skin care makes her skin rejuvenate. She always control her life for healthy beauty.
3.It\'s getting colder and colder every day, but it\\\'s still bearable. In a sense, autumn is a season that makes life\'s struggles bearable.
4.The cherry blossom is a symbol of the renewal of hope. Most of all, its pink color viewing make us feel happy and refreshed.
5.I began to appreciate my normal life and surroundings. Because I have important friends who not only give me positive energy although they used to have trouble in many ways but also help me without hesitation.
>> \"All work no play makes jack a dull boy\" Do you agree?
Yes, i agree. Because good energy like play make all work improve achievement and goal. It is significant to have balance of productivity and rest. I also always keep efforts to manage to finish my academy works in only here and i recharge back home.
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HOMEWORK I:
1.Every year during this season, we got to see the blossoms. Cherry blossom viewing is very popular in korea as well.
>> Every year during this season, we get to see the flowers blossom. Cherry blossom viewing is very popular in Korea as well.
2.Steady skin care makes her skin rejuvenate. She always control her life for healthy beauty.
>> Steady skin care rejuvenates her skin. She always controls her life to have a healthy beauty.
3.It\'s getting colder and colder every day, but it\'s still bearable. In a sense, autumn is a season that makes life\'s struggles bearable.
>> correct
4.The cherry blossom is a symbol of the renewal of hope. Most of all, its pink color viewing make us feel happy and refreshed.
>> The cherry blossom is a symbol of the renewal of hope. Most of all, its pink color makes us feel happy and refreshed.
5. I began to appreciate my normal life and surroundings. Because I have important friends who not only give me positive energy although they used to have trouble in many ways but also help me without hesitation.
>> I began to appreciate my normal life and surroundings because I have important friends who not only give me positive energy although they used to have trouble in many ways but also help me without hesitation.
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HOMEWORK II:
>> \"All work no play makes jack a dull boy\" Do you agree?
Yes, i agree. Because good energy like play make all work improve achievement and goal.
>> Yes, I agree because having a good energy brought about by playing improves our work, achievement, and goal.
It is significant to have balance of productivity and rest.
>> It is significant to achieve a healthy balance between productivity and rest.
I also always keep efforts to manage to finish my academy works in only here and i recharge back home.
>> I also give all my efforts to finish my academy works in the academy and then recharge when I get back home.
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