2019 year passed away three days ago.
학생이 쓴 원문
In last year, the weather has not good comparing with my mood.
Last year, from the january I have studied in the public library.
And in the latter part of the year, I went to the jeju island for resting.
I don\'t know what the weather like.
I hate those year that has passed away.
And I would like to start a new plan with this new year.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework, [이름]. Great job in sharing your thoughts. Keep it up!^_^
In last year, the weather has not good comparing with my mood.
>>>Last year, the weather was not good compared to my mood.
Last year, from the january I have studied in the public library.
>>>Since January last year, I have studied in a public library.
And in the latter part of the year, I went to the jeju island for resting.
>>>I went to Jeju island to rest in the latter part of 2019.
I don\'t know what the weather like.
>>>I don\'t know what\'s the weather like.
I hate those year that has passed away.
>>>I hate those year that passed by.
And I would like to start a new plan with this new year.
>>>Also, I would like to start a new plan this new year.
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