2020.03.16 Homework

2020-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

1. However 2. On the other hand 3. Firstly 4. Though 5. At least 6. Then 7. whereas 8. Why do you think I don\'t want to go out tonight? Actually,~ 9. Moreover 10. Besides I thought that the first sentence of number 8 had a problem with punctuation marks, so I changed period into question mark. Is it right? I had no idea where I should fill ‘at least’. Also, I was confused by distinguishing ‘moreover’ and ‘Besides’. I had to write only answers because of limitation on the homepage.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jenny! Thank you for this homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^

Yes, you are right, sentence number 8 should be a question mark. Thank you ^ ^

At least is use to emphasize that something is good in a bad situation. Hence for sentence number 1.

For moreover, you got it right for number 9. We use it to a piece of information that adds to or supports the previous statement.

For besides, you got it right too! It really gets confusing a little because \"besides\" can also mean \"moreover\" right? But if we base it on the tone of the sentence, it is more appropriate to use \"besides\" in a more conversational and less formal way.

-Teacher Jedah

1. However

>>I had a terrible day at work and lost my umbrella too.At least, I spoke to that nice guy who works in the coffee shop at last!
2. On the other hand

>>CORRECT
3. Firstly

>>CORRECT
4. Though

>>CORRECT
5. At least

>>I\'ve always known Caroline as a mean person. However , she lent me $10 yesterday without me having to ask twice!
6. Then

>>CORRECT
7. whereas

>>CORRECT
8. Why do you think I don\'t want to go out tonight? Actually,~

>>CORRECT
9. Moreover

>>CORRECT
10. Besides

>>CORRECT

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