2020.03.20 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the coronavirus has been spread all over the world because of the immature management of China at first. Therefore, the initial action is the most important thing to prevent the next pandemic. Also, we need to be cautious about the power of virus. I remember that there were only about 20 people who were infected by corona 19 in Korea. When the general public watched the news about small-scaled infectees, they did not realize the situation as an emergency. They didn\'t wear masks at public places and didn\'t keep social distancing which the Korea government demanded people to do. Moreover, I think researchers need to be prepared for a new virus. For this, the government should support a research fund wealthily. Unlike nowadays, especially Korea treated novel influenza well since we had many kinds of existing vaccines which can be combined in lots of ways. I think many people learn a lesson from the corona situation, so I hope everyone to be prepared for the next pandemic well.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jenny! A wonderful Monday to you! ^ ^ Thank you for spending a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate the effort!
You made a good point here. We know that a new kind of virus will emerged anytime soon; it\'s a given fact. The most we can do is to be prepared for it. And like you said, the government should focus more on the funding of such endeavor. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I think the coronavirus has been spread all over the world because of the immature management of China at first.
>>I think the spread of COVID19 to the world was due to China\'s lack of immediate response about it.
Therefore, the initial action is the most important thing to prevent the next pandemic.
>>An immediate response to this kind of situation is a preventive measure for a pandemic.
Also, we need to be cautious about the power of virus.
>>Also, we have to be fully aware of the potency of the virus.
I remember that there were only about 20 people who were infected by corona 19 in Korea.
>>CORRECT
When the general public watched the news about small-scaled infectees, they did not realize the situation as an emergency.
>>CORRECT
They didn\'t wear masks at public places and didn\'t keep social distancing which the Korea government demanded people to do.
>>CORRECT
Moreover, I think researchers need to be prepared for a new virus.
>>CORRECT
For this, the government should support a research fund wealthily.
>>For this, the government should support a research fund generously.
Unlike nowadays, especially Korea treated novel influenza well since we had many kinds of existing vaccines which can be combined in lots of ways.
>>CORRECT
I think many people learn a lesson from the corona situation, so I hope everyone to be prepared for the next pandemic well.
>>CORRECT (*learned)
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