2020.2.10.monday

2020-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Oneil

학생이 쓴 원문

1.We can try bungee jumping. 2.We can try climbing. 3.We can try skydiving. Hi,teacher! I\'m today is very tired. But tomorrow I will learn with a brighter face. Thank you for your consideration of me today. Good night. teacher!

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing your homework even if you are busy. :) You might feel down today but you were great! Keep it up dear! ^_^

1.We can try bungee jumping.
>> Correct

2.We can try climbing.
>> Correct

3.We can try skydiving.
>> Correct.

Hi,teacher!
>> Hi teacher!

I\'m today is very tired. But tomorrow I will learn with a brighter face.
>> Today is a very tiring day but tomorrow when we learn in class, I will have a brighter face.

Thank you for your consideration of me today.
>> Thank you for your consideration today.

Good night. teacher!
>> Good night teacher!

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