2020.2.27.thursdy Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to know everything now that I will learn in my future.
Then I think I can do more than I do now.
I also think we can learn more ways to solve problems.
강사 첨삭
Is that so? haha :D I think this is a good idea though.
I want to know everything now that I will learn in my future.
>> I want to know everything that I will learn in the future.
Then I think I can do more than I do now.
>> With this, I think I can do more than what I can do now.
I also think we can learn more ways to solve problems.
>> I also think that we can learn more ways to solve problems.
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