2020.3.2.Monday Homework

2020-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Oneil

학생이 쓴 원문

1.I want to be Young and Rich. Because if you have a lot of money, you can do anything. 2.I want to grow taller. Because I have bad physical to play soccer now. 3.I wish my family would never get sick. Because I want to live with my family forever.

강사 첨삭

I wish for your family to always be safe and healthy too dear. When you get rich, please do not forget me. haha
1.I want to be Young and Rich.
Because if you have a lot of money, you can do anything.
>> I want to be young and rich because if I have a lot of money, I can do anything.

2.I want to grow taller.
Because I have bad physical to play soccer now.
>> I want to grow taller because I am not very good at playing soccer now. 

3.I wish my family would never get sick.
Because I want to live with my family forever.
>> I wish for my family never to get sick because I want to live with my family forever.

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