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학생이 쓴 원문
Where would you like to travel after this pandemic?
I would like to travel many place.
These days, I can travel in China and there are only low risk aeres.
So I thinking about travel to Sanya, Hainan on this Golden week. but I\'m not sure I can travel or not.
Because I\'m confuse about sclool\'s notice.
The school director siad complete travel plan servey.
It has some qeuetions as date, travel area.. and agree this sentence.
\"I understand that I may be subject to quarantine, home isolation, NAT testing, or other requirements before being allowed to return to school if traveling to a medium-risk or high--risk area.\"
So I really confuse they allowed students\' travel or not.
강사 첨삭
Hi HK! It\'s so nice of you to spend a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate it. I hope you will stay consistent with doing it since it would really be a good practice and a big help for you in harnessing your skills. ^ ^
I have refined your sentences lacking in articles and made them more sound appealing as well. ^ ^ Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I hope you can still travel so you can relax and have more fun with your boys. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I would like to travel many place.
>>I would like to travel to many places.
These days, I can travel in China and there are only low risk aeres.
>>These days I can only travel to low risk areas in China.
So I thinking about travel to Sanya, Hainan on this Golden week.
>>So I\'m thinking of traveling to Sanya, Hainan this Golden week.
but I\'m not sure I can travel or not.
>>But I\'m not sure whether I can travel or not.
Because I\'m confuse about sclool\'s notice.
>>Because I\'m so confused with the school\'s notices.
The school director siad complete travel plan servey.
>>The school director said we must fill in a travel plan survey.
It has some qeuetions as date, travel area.. and agree this sentence.
>>It has some questions about the travel date, place to go and whether I agree or disagree with some statements.
\"I understand that I may be subject to quarantine, home isolation, NAT
testing, or other requirements before being allowed to return to school
if traveling to a medium-risk or high--risk area.\"
>>CORRECT
So I really confuse they allowed students\' travel or not.
>>So now I\'m confused whether they will allow students to travel or not.
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