2021.03.12
학생이 쓴 원문
Question : Why should we hire you?
Answer :
First of all, I am a person full of positive energy.
My colleagues used to say, we got a good energy from you and you always make a team feel good.
This is helpful for team work efficiency.
And above all, I am a good team player.
So I can help achieve team\'s objective without trouble with my team member.
A person who benefit the team is benefit the compay too.
I can say that kind of person is me.
Thank you.
Here is the answer of third job interview question.
I will try to apply for another 20-minute class on Monday.
I hope I will sucess.
I have a little bit confidece of Engligh job interview.
Thank you. :D
Have a good weekneds and see you next Monday.
강사 첨삭
Wow! I like your answer to this question, [이름]! It\'s straight to the point! Just be more patient and you will achieve your goal. Take care! See you later! -Faith-
Question : Why should we hire you?>> CORRECT
Answer :
>> CORRECT
First of all, I am a person full of positive energy.
First of all, I am a person full of positive energy.
>> CORRECT
My colleagues used to say, we got a good energy from you and you always make a team feel good.
My colleagues used to say, we got a good energy from you and you always make a team feel good.
>> My colleagues used to say that my energy was contagious and because of that our team was also enthusiastic.
This is helpful for team work efficiency.
This is helpful for team work efficiency.
>> This kind of personality is helpful for team efficacy.
And above all, I am a good team player.
And above all, I am a good team player.
>> CORRECT
OR Most importantly, I am a good team player.
So I can help achieve team\'s objective without trouble with my team member.
So I can help achieve team\'s objective without trouble with my team member.
>> So, I can help achieve the team\'s objective without creating trouble with my team members.
A person who benefit the team is benefit the compay too.
A person who benefit the team is benefit the compay too.
>> A person who brings benefits to a team is a benefit to a company too.
I can say that kind of person is me.
I can say that kind of person is me.
>> I can say that kind of person is me.
Thank you.
Thank you.
>> CORRECT
Here is the answer of third job interview question.
>> Here is the answer to the third job interview question.
I will try to apply for another 20-minute class on Monday.
>> CORRECT
I hope I will sucess.
Here is the answer of third job interview question.
>> Here is the answer to the third job interview question.
I will try to apply for another 20-minute class on Monday.
>> CORRECT
I hope I will sucess.
>> I hope I will succeed.
I have a little bit confidece of Engligh job interview.
>> I have a little bit of confidence in my English job interview.
Thank you. :D
CORRECT
Have a good weekneds and see you next Monday.
I have a little bit confidece of Engligh job interview.
>> I have a little bit of confidence in my English job interview.
Thank you. :D
CORRECT
Have a good weekneds and see you next Monday.
>> Have a good weekend and see you next Monday.
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