2021/12/10 homework
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Is there anything you need to buy for your place? Where do you usually go shop for things you need?
I need to buy clothes dryer to dry my clothes before laundry. I always use hanger to dry my clothes. It is very uncomfortable to dry my clothes and I don’t have a empty space to hang clothes. I usually go Daiso and Emart for things I need. Daiso have a lots of cheap things which I need. Highest cost of thing is 5000won so I usually go for shop. Emart is quite different with Daiso because Emart is more expensive then Daiso but Emart have everything. Each mart have pros and cons.
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Thanks for this Chris. I heard a lot about Daiso. I wish we had one in my neighborhood.
I need to buy clothes dryer to dry my clothes before laundry.
I need to buy clothes dryer to dry my clothes before laundry.
>>> I need to buy clothes dryer to dry my clothes AFTER laundry.
I always use hanger to dry my clothes.
>>> correct
It is very uncomfortable to dry my clothes and I don’t have a empty space to hang clothes.
>>> It is very uncomfortable to dry my clothes and I don’t have AN empty space to hang clothes.
>>> OR: It is quite uncomfortable to dry my clothes and I don’t have ENOUGH space to hang THEM IN.
I usually go Daiso and Emart for things I need.
>>> I usually go TO Daiso and Emart for things I need.
Daiso have a lots of cheap things which I need.
>>> Daiso HAS a lot of cheap things which I need.
Highest cost of thing is 5000won so I usually go for shop.
>>> OR: The most expensive item costs 5000 win so I usually fo there to shop.
Emart is quite different with Daiso because Emart is more expensive then Daiso but Emart have everything.
>>> Emart is quite different FROM Daiso because Emart is more expensive THAN Daiso but Emart HAS everything.
Each mart have pros and cons.
>>> Each mart HAS pros and cons.
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