2021 is almost over~

2021-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

학생이 쓴 원문

Q.1 : Have you ever dreamt about something that later came true? A.1 : Sometimes, When I was tired, I had dreamt about getting a job at Korea Air. It seems that I really want to be mechanic of aircraft maintenance at Korea Air. So, Even thought the pandemic situation is now, I\'ll definitely get ready and keep moving. Q.2 : Have you ever felt that you knew some people the first time you met them? A.2 : I have to say that It\'s rare. There are times when I meet familiar faces, But I don\'t think I do. and our class too is almost over. so, I will re enroll this class with you. Please take good care of teaching me next year. :)

강사 첨삭

I know that if you work hard and wait patiently, your dreams will all come true, [이름]! Never surrender!-Faith-
Q.1 : Have you ever dreamt about something that later came true?
>> CORRECT
A.1 : Sometimes, When I was tired, I had dreamt about getting a job at Korea Air. 
>> A.1 : Sometimes, when I am tired, I dream about getting a job at Korea Air. 
It seems that I really want to be mechanic of aircraft maintenance at Korea Air. 
>> It seems that I really want to be an aircraft mechanic at Korea Air. 
So, Even thought the pandemic situation is now, I\'ll definitely get ready and keep moving.
>> So, even though there is still pandemic now, I\'ll definitely get ready and keep moving.
Q.2 : Have you ever felt that you knew some people the first time you met them?
>> CORRECT
A.2 : I have to say that It\'s rare. 
>> CORRECT
There are times when I meet familiar faces, But I don\'t think I do.
>> There are times when I meet familiar faces, but I don\'t think I do.
and our class too is almost over. so, I will re enroll this class with you. 
>> Anyway, our class too is almost over, so I will re-enroll this class with you. 
Please take good care of teaching me next year. :)
>> CORRECT
OR Please take good care of our classes next year. :)

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