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2022-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: Kindly answer the following in essay form. Can you give me one superstition in South Korea? Explain in detail. Answer: In the night, I play flute and appear the snake.

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Hi [이름]:)

Wow! That\'s scary. Hahaha! I will never play the flute at night if that\'s so.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon

In the night, I play flute and appear the snake.
>> One superstition in South Korea is that when you play the flute at night, a snake will appear.

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