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2022-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: Kindly answer the following in essay form. Do you think learning how to play an instrument is important? Why or why not? Answer: It\'s important. Because my talent is increase.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]:)

This is true. Learning how to play an instrument can enhance your skills.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon

It\'s important. Because my talent is increase.
>> It think it is important because it can enhance my talent.

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