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2022-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: Kindly answer the following in essay form. Do you think Valentine\'s day is important? Why or why not? Answer:Maybe. Because it’s importent for someone

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]:)

Valentine\'s day is a joyous occasion. It is a day when we can show our love towards other people like our family and friends. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

Maybe. Because it’s importent for someone

>> Maybe, because it is important for other people.

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