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2022-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: Kindly answer the following in essay form. What is your favorite English movie and why? It is Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them. Because it’s fantastic!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] :)

I\'ve never seen those movies before. But since you like them so much, I will watch it too! :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

It is Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them.

>> My favorite English movies are \"Fantastic Beasts\" and \"Where to find them\".

Because it’s fantastic!

>> It is Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them. Because it’s fantastic!

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