2022.2.24
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Kindly answer the following in essay form.
Which one do you think is better, living in a country that has 2 seasons or 4 seasons? Explain your answer.
Answer: 4 seasons. Because I like snow and warm days :3
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
That\'s true. With 4 seasons, there are many activities that we can do like swimming, skiing, playing sports and many more. :)
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4 seasons. Because I like snow and warm days :3
>> I like countries with 4 seasons because I like snowy and warm days. :3
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