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2022-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: Kindly answer the following in essay form. If you can move to another country, which one would you pick and why? Answer: I want go South Korea. Because I go last is 7 years ago.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] :)

That sounds like a fun trip! I hope you can go there very soon and meet your family and friends again.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

I want go South Korea. Because I go last is 7 years ago.
>> I want to go to South Korea because it\'s been 7 years since I have been there.

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