2022.3.29

2022-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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HOMEWORK: Kindly answer the following in essay form. What is the best restaurant in your town and what do they serve there? It is bisquit . They serve spaghetti, meat, pizza and many more

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Wow. That sounds like a great restaurant. Their menu is scrumptious.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

It is bisquit.
>> The best restaurant for me is called \"Bisquit\".

They serve spaghetti, meat, pizza and many more.
>> They serve spaghetti, meat, pizza, and many more.

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