2022.3.30

2022-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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HOMEWORK: Kindly answer the following in essay form. What is the best gift you have ever received and why is it so special? It is in 2022’s birthday gift. Because I goes to the Bergama in the İzmir

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Hi [이름]!

That sounds exciting! Wow.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

It is in 2022’s birthday gift. Because I goes to the Bergama in the İzmir

>> The best gift I have ever received is the one from this year because me and my family went to Bergama.

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