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2022-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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HOMEWORK: Kindly answer the following in essay form. Do you think there is still inequality between men and women there in South Korea? Explain your answer. I thing.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! 

Inequality is never okay. There shouldn\'t be any boundaries or limitations on what a man or a woman can and can\'t do. 

PS: Make sure your answer is in complete sentences and there should also be an explanation. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I thing.
>> I think so. 

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