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2022-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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HOMEWORK: Kindly answer the following in essay form. What city do you think is the best in South Korea? Explain your answer. I think it is Jeju island. Because there is tourist destination

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Hi [이름]!

That place sounds great. No wonder it\'s very popular for the locals and foreigners. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I think it is Jeju island. Because there is tourist destination

>> It think it is Jeju Island because it is tourist destination.

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