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2022-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: Kindly answer the following essay form. What is your favorite book and why? What lesson can you learn from it as well? It is Ulysses Moore. Because It is fantasy. I love fantasies. It helps Turkish lesson.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

That sounds like a great book :) Good choice.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

It is Ulysses Moore. Because It is fantasy.

>> My favorite book is the \"Ulysses Moore\" because it is a fantasy movie.

I love fantasies.

>> CORRECT

It helps Turkish lesson.

>> It helps teach me Turkish lessons.

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