2023.7.12 homework

2023-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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Studying English is very important. Because we live in the global world. If I\'m good at English, I can get a job abroad. I want to communicate many foreigners around the world by English. Although my english skill is not good now, but I will try everyting. You know what they say, \"Well begun is half done.\" please cheer me up.

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

Studying English is very important.

>> CORRECT!

Because we live in the global world.

>> It\'s because we live in the global world.

If I\'m good at English, I can get a job abroad.

>> CORRECT!
I want to communicate many foreigners around the world by English.

>> I want to communicate with many foreigners around the world by speaking English.

Although my english skill is not good now, but I will try everyting.

>> Although my English skill is not good now, but I will try everything I could.

You know what they say, \"Well begun is half done.\"

>> CORRECT!

Please cheer me up.

>> CORRECT!

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