2023.7.19 homework
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Usually, I prefer to go outside with my friends rather than taking a rest at home. We drink soju and beer with pork, after we go to karaoke. I like to hang out with people. Sometimes I take a rest at home to recover stemina. But there is uncommon situation. After going outside, my stress is completely disappeared.
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Usually, I prefer to go outside with my friends rather than taking a rest at home.
>> CORRECT!We drink soju and beer with pork, after we go to karaoke.
>> CORRECT!I like to hang out with people.
>> CORRECT!Sometimes I take a rest at home to recover stemina.
>> Sometimes I take a rest at home to recover my stamina.
But there is uncommon situation.
>> But there is an uncommon situation.
After going outside, my stress is completely disappeared.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> After going outside, I feel relieved.
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