2023.7.21 homework
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To be honest, the benefits of working on weekend is nothing.
I think People must take a rest at least 2 days in a row. Otherwise the condition is down. So When I worked as a staff, my condition was not good. Also, it is hard to meet people during working on weekend. In conclusion, that was terrible schdule for me.
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To be honest, the benefits of working on weekend is nothing.
>> To be honest, the benefits of working on weekends are nothing.
I think People must take a rest at least 2 days in a row.
>> CORRECT!Otherwise the condition is down.
>> CORRECT!OR >> Otherwise, their condition would be bad.
So When I worked as a staff, my condition was not good.
>> CORRECT!Also, it is hard to meet people during working on weekend.
>> Also, it is hard to meet people when working on weekends.
In conclusion, that was terrible schdule for me.
>> In conclusion, that was a terrible schedule for me.
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