2023.7.24 homework
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I think some infomations such as phone number, detail address should be hided from unknown people. Because it could be dangerous like voice fishing, constant stock market ad.
The only thing I appear is normal profile like university, age, gender...
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I think some infomations such as phone number, detail address should be hided from unknown people.
>> I think some pieces of information such as phone number, detail address should be hidden from unknown people.
Because it could be dangerous like voice fishing, constant stock market ad.
Because it could be dangerous like voice fishing, constant stock market ad.
>> It\'s because it could be dangerous like voice phishing, and receiving constant stock market ad.
The only thing I appear is normal profile like university, age, gender.
>> The only thing I show is a normal profile like university, age, gender.
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