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2024-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 Anji

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: WHAT IS YOUR MOST IMPORTANT POSSESSION? I have a______________________. It is so important to me. I got it when_______________________. I will always _________________ no matter what. People often tell me that I’m lucky for __________________ it I have a healthy body. It is so important to me. I got it when 2 years ago. I will always work out for 1 hour no matter what. People often tell me that I’m lucky for help it

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! I am glad to know that you are in your best health. Please stay healthy. As they say, health is wealth. See you again!

--Teacher Anji

I have a healthy body. It is so important to me.

>>CORRECT

I got it when 2 years ago.

>> I got it two years ago.
I will always work out for 1 hour no matter what.

>>CORRECT

People often tell me that I’m lucky for help it

>> People often tell me that I’m lucky for having it

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