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2024-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Anji

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: 2. WHICH COUNTRY WOULD YOU LIKE TO VISIT? I would like to go Kyoto. I want to go there because it is very traditional. I heard that people always go there for delicious food. I hope to go this month .

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ms. [이름]! I hope you can go to Kyoto next month. I am sure you will have a great time. Thank you for the great answers. See you!
--Teacher Anji

I would like to go Kyoto.
>> I would like to go to Kyoto.
I want to go there because it is very traditional.
>> CORRECT
I heard that people always go there for delicious food.
>> CORRECT
I hope to go this month.
>> CORRECT

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